Gravity equals tragedy…

A golden fry falls
to earth like Icarus it was
salty, like my tears

  • You know, the remake is just as good as the original–I don’t care what the critics say.

  • KurtVon

    a frozen moment
    for the page gives no response
    press submit again

  • You obviously haven’t heard of the five second rule then.

  • The annoying thing is that now I have to leave both posts up.

  • “second verse, same as the first”

  • The fearless Ken Begg.
    Trouble with the computer?
    Post it all again.

  • KurtVon

    I know this topic is well over, but I couldn’t resist translating the original haiku into Japanese. My haiku always made the instructor cry (usually he cried “why me?”):

    Furenchi Furai,
    yuka ni furu
    namida aji

    The french fry
    falls like rain to the ground,
    tear flavored.